Cuentos para niños
-Niños convertidos en tortugas, en puercos, en víboras y demás animales que lloran, se quejan y arrepienten – dijo la pequeña a su hermano, tratando de convencerlo de que entrara con ella a la carpa- ¡esos no son castigos de verdad! Si yo quisiera escarmentar a un niño por su insolencia lo transformaría en algo feroz, que ni siquiera tuviera memoria de lo que fue.
Al atravesar la carpa el niño titubeó un instante. Luego vio como la figura de su hermana crecía y se deformaba. Algunos adultos próximos alcanzaron a escuchar el breve grito que profirió momentos antes de que la sombra erizada del lobo le arrancase con el primer zarpazo la garganta.
On this page, you can:
Start your own free art collection. Sign up here!DownloadSee more of this artist:sangre6deslavada's profilesangre6deslavada's gallery
Some rights reserved. This work is licensed under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License.
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-No Derivative Works 3.0 License.
Author's Comments
Este breve texto viene a formar parte de un género que ultimamente se ha difundido mucho en latinoamérica: la minificción. La minificción es un género que consiste en tomar los elementos mínimos de la narración y expresarlos en una forma muy concisa. Tiene como máximo exponente a Augusto Monterroso, cuya minificción más famosa copiaré a continuación:
"Cuando despertó, el dinosaurio todavía estaba allí" La imagen, por supuesto, es una ilustración de Gustav Doré al cuento de Caperucita Roja. Acepto todas las críticas y comentarios. |
|
Report a Policy Violation
Site Map
Community News5220 Wacom: Bring Your Vision to Life - Dreams Contest$Moonbeam13
 reports, 22h 50m agoDeviantART and Wacom are proud to present the second Intuos4 "Bring Your Vision To Life" contest! Open to all artists all over the world, we challenge you to show us your dreams and aspirations for the future. Get drawing! 841 Love Unites Print Remix Contest w/ Shepard Fairey$gzobel
 reports, 16h 42m agoDeviantART has partnered with FAIR to help promote equality through The Love Unites Shepard Fairey Equality Project. We're asking deviants to align themselves with this cause and have their work judged by Shepard Fairey himself! 76 Daily Literature Deviations- November 13, 2009=DailyLitDeviations
 reports, 1d 11h agoDaily Literature Deviations is a group that is dedicated to bringing literature to the forefront of the deviantArt community. We attempt to accomplish this by daily featuring Literature artists from around the community that deserve the recognition, but are not getting it. Each day we will feature 5 deviations from the Literature categories in a News Article. In order to support the artists that we feature, we ask that you  the news article as well as check out the individual pieces. We understand that each day you may not be able to check out each and every one of the pieces, everyone has their own things going on. We just ask that you make an attempt to help support the growing Literature community.50 Comment Month Features - Issue 3*ProjectComment
 reports, 1d 23h agoThis news article features five deviants who took part in Comment Month through commenting on the deviations that were submitted. Please give your time to  this article and to write constructive comments so that you make a true difference to the artists featured here. Although not all may be underappreciated, their efforts deserve to be recognised and celebrated.47 Stock From October and info.^Hanratty-Stock
 reports, 22h 8m agoA (delayed) look back on October's stock and exciting events. Better late than pregnant! |
PollHaters... |
deviantART Loves You
Deviously serving the art and skin community for 3,386 days.
Only 266 days until our tenth birthday!
|
Deviousness
The Deviousness Award is an accolade which is traditionally handed out on the 1st of every month to one trully outstanding deviant. `Cyantre is one of the most helpful deviants within our community. With a positive attitude and a resourceful mind, you can always find him providing support and encouragement to those in need. Always looking for ways in which he can get more involved in our community, John's positive presence is to be aspired to. A well respected poet, John is a must-have on your deviantWATCH to make sure that you don't miss out on your dose of community inspiration. It's with great pleasure that the Deviousness Award for November 2009 goes to... Read More
|
Follow us on Twitter
Become a fan on Facebook
©2009 deviantART. All rights reserved
Comments
Saludos!!
--
...Soy el viento susurrante que corrompe los sentidos...
--
Avatar By - :devtwisted-scissors :
trabajas con una simbología curiosa al transformar al niño en lobo, en querer castigar convirtiendo en algo que prive de recuerdos.
es muy bueno
eres consciente de ello no?
saludos .p
--
"Come, I wanna hear your whispering me that song"
I am the moondance"
pero siempre subes cosas buenas
me gusta este escrito
--
Life isn's fair, but that's what makes it so great and beautiful.
-96% of teens won't stand up for God. Put this in your sig if you're one of the 4% who will-
Me ha gustado mucho tu texto! Habrá más de este estilo? :3
--
...no need to say goodbye...
Mola, mola
Me gustó el texto, pero en cierto modo, obliga a ser releido, y no se hasta que punto eso es bueno cuando se trata de ser conciso -tampoco estoy muy introducido en esto de las minificciones asique lo dejo como simple y posiblemente invalida opinion.
Por cierto, sobre el tema de las minificciones, hay un club que empezó hace algo mas de medio año,
Un saludo, a ver si sigo echandole un ojoa tu galeria, creo que podría ser interesante ^^
--
- Tu serás feliz.
Se curioso, mira al cielo, sonrie. Grita, canta, baila aunque tengas que hacerlo solo. Sonrie.
Esto ba a favs por cierto! ^^
--
†††_SnäL_†††
[†] No llueve eternamente[†]
Es interesante eso de la minificcón.
Supongo que al ser el texto tan corto estás obligado a dejar cosas sin precisar. La hermana dice que le gustaria que transformaran a los niños castigados en fieras feroces pero, ¿sabe ella que lo es? ¿No, verdad?
En fin, la verdad es que me ha encantado
--
I'm sorry for my bad english... ^^U
teeheehee~~
Previous Page12Next Page